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A literary agent's guide to AI-suspicious submissions.

The number is where you start looking. It is not where you stop thinking.

Agents and acquiring editors did not sign up to be forensic analysts. But the slush pile changed, and "is any of this manuscript a machine?" is now a question that affects advances, contracts, and reputations. Here is a workflow that takes the question seriously without turning your inbox into a tribunal.

Start with the reading, not the tool

Before any software, trust the experience that got you this job. AI manuscripts tend to fail in a characteristic way: they are competent at the sentence and hollow at the scene. Plot beats arrive on schedule; nothing surprises. Characters have backstory but no interiority. The prose never embarrasses itself and never risks anything. If a submission makes you think "this is clean but I feel nothing," that instinct is data. The tool is for testing the hypothesis your reading already formed.

A three-tier triage

You cannot deep-analyze 2,000 submissions. You can triage them.

  • Tier 1 — pass on craft. Most of the pile is declined for ordinary reasons. AI status is irrelevant to a manuscript you're rejecting anyway. Don't spend the cycles.
  • Tier 2 — interested, run a check. For the small set you'd actually consider, a structural audit is cheap insurance. Treat an elevated result as "read the flagged chapters again, closely," not as a decision.
  • Tier 3 — offer stage. Before anything contractual, a fuller pass plus a direct, normal conversation about process. By this point you're talking to the writer anyway.

Reading a result honestly

The most important habit is internalizing the false-positive cases. A spare, disciplined literary voice can score like a machine because the very features detectors punish — even cadence, low lexical surprise, sanitized dialogue — are also the features of mastered minimalism. A debut that reads like early Didion is exactly the submission a careless screen will libel. If you would be embarrassed to defend an accusation to the writer's face using only a number, you do not yet have enough to act on.

Look instead for convergence with the reading. A high score on a manuscript that also felt hollow, with the flags landing on the chapters that felt most generic, is a coherent picture. A high score on a manuscript that moved you is far more likely to be the tool punishing craft than the writer deceiving you.

How to raise it with a writer

If a project clears your interest bar but you have a real concern, the conversation is survivable if you frame it as process, not accusation. Useful, non-hostile prompts:

"Tell me about how you drafted this — what your revision process looked like, what changed between drafts, which parts were hardest."

A writer who lived inside the book can talk about it endlessly and specifically: the scene they cut, the character who started as someone else, the ending they rewrote five times. Vague, process-free answers are far more telling than any score. You are not running an interrogation; you are having the conversation you'd have anyway, listening for whether a human mind clearly inhabited this work.

What a policy should — and shouldn't — say

Agencies are writing AI clauses into submission guidelines. The ones that will age well share three traits: they distinguish assistive use (a model as a thesaurus or a brainstorming partner) from generative authorship; they ask for disclosure rather than threatening detection; and they never promise that a piece of software determines authorship. A guideline that says "we screen with AI detection and act on the results" is a lawsuit waiting for a plaintiff. A guideline that says "we expect substantially human authorship and ask you to disclose AI use" is enforceable and fair.

The one rule

Never decline a writer, and never make an allegation, on a number alone. Use structural analysis the way you use a second reader: to direct attention, sharpen questions, and check an instinct — then make the judgment yourself, the way you always have. The tools are good enough to be useful and not nearly good enough to be a verdict. Acting as if they were is the only way this technology actually hurts the writers you exist to represent.

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